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To gain respect,become admirable comendable or even considerable from your view.to be abstemius of all the stereo types,and acusations weather true or false, What must I do? I feel worthy of genuflection,and some sort of honor but you continue to present ways I'm definitely not.For a Matter of years I was under the sick impression that we were created to be adjacent and equal,Yet you display numerous ways I was out of my mind. So how do I come to? If I'm mysteriously confused,teach me.Not to be exaulted however noticed,Where must I go? After holding my breath so long, When do I become important enough to finally exhale? For my vote to be taken seriously must i live In the Hills of Beverly? You deride me for not being up to par and for being in the clouds. So when will you brainwash me?!
Posted By: darinesha ray
Saturday, September 13th 2008 at 12:58PM
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Be who you are, not what you percieve the world would have you to be. You are worthy to be praised because you are a unique creation. A work of art will always be criticised and scrutinized. It does not change the work to hear these things, it mearly gives it greater meaning and definition. It shines the spotlight upon a miracle. YOU! GB
Saturday, September 13th 2008 at 1:39PM
Lesley Knight
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Thank you both a bunch you both made much scense, and i agree.
Saturday, September 13th 2008 at 1:52PM
darinesha ray
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Dress yourself in God's love everyday and whatever else you wear will always be in style. We weren't created to be "adjacent and equal", however, we are all parts of the same body. Just because you can't see the brain, does not mean it's not there or not important. Even a bugger has a purpose! (I don't know if I spelled it right, the yucky green things in our nose). You are awesome! I love you! You are beautiful!
Saturday, September 13th 2008 at 2:15PM
Lesley Knight
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LOL your both funny yet so right and this blog as well as manny other blogs apply to me personally and im sure that in some fasion you can relate as well.
Saturday, September 13th 2008 at 2:38PM
darinesha ray
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C we all boogers (thanks for the spell check) at some point or another. Agree? Perhaps you know the song by the lyrics?..."I know (we) like to think that (our) sh** don't stink, but lean a little bit closer, see your roses really smell like poo-oo-oo-oo. All we can do is get back up again, dust ourselves off, ask Daddy to wash us clean again, and move on. And in response to me being funny, much truth is spoken in jest! GB
Saturday, September 13th 2008 at 2:49PM
Lesley Knight
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Great post... but excuse my plain high school education.... but who are you questioning? These questions are so above man as in mankind, because men as in male could NEVER answer them. LK quoted a song to drive a point home and DJay gave me the man as in mankind.... but lyrocs of a fictional character will never answer the questions you posed... But I agree you MUST BE YOURSELF.
Saturday, September 13th 2008 at 4:05PM
GREGORY GULLEY
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GG thanx! It is sad, I know, to grasp at any words other than His word is futile and of little true effect. GB
Saturday, September 13th 2008 at 4:26PM
Lesley Knight
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Darinesha, I don't want to answer, because I don’t think poems need answers. I take this for what it appears to be…an outstanding poem from one of our nation’s finest young writers. Keep doing what you do to stimulate thought. GREAT POEM! I would suggest you get some help proof reading and try to publish your words. You have a gift.
Sunday, September 14th 2008 at 1:37PM
Dr. Ahmad Glover
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thank you all a lot, and yes Dr. Glover I think that would be a great idea
Sunday, September 14th 2008 at 4:22PM
darinesha ray
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