The Moment of Eclipse

It was spectacular!!! I watched her just fade away into darkness.... I had a group of about 15 kids in complete awe just looking at the moon using my binoculars and telescope.... I think I enjoyed their learning experience than mines... Eager little minds wanting to explore... I missed my calling... Teaching science....

But on the real... I ain't got time for the bad azz kids!! Just give me the eager little ones....

Steve, I love this poetic expression.
It's written much like an Haicu?
Is it?

Miisrael, maybe subconciously. I was just thinking how to descibe what I was seeing. I was in the field behind my house and I had to keep moving because the moon was going down behind the trees. I had it lined up with the last gap in the trees, the sky was getting brighter, and just as it reached the full eclipse it disappeared from view.

I wish I could write a poem about the fireflies. I was looking out over this same field in the evening the day after Irma died. A great multitude of fireflies was alighting from the grass and rising into the twilit sky. I thought of Irma, a beutiful creature of light, ascending to heaven.

Just start it off and critique as you write down the words. It often works for me slowly it'll develop.

I reckon so?

I'll give it a try.

Well did anyone see the spectacular views of the moon at its highest point in the north and the moon rising in the west... When I got to work at 8:30am..est time I looked up and saw Miss Moon.. And Mister Sun up in the sky... I'm just so elated with the heavens and creation.. . I'm just in awe...

Sun rising in the west!!! Dayum smart phone. . Tryin to think for me..

I'm confused. Moon in the north? Highest point at 8:30 AM?

Sun rise:7:02 am on the east 98,,° moon set 9:22 am
Something about the length of the days being shorter...

Watch your early morning sky ... The sun and the moon... Watch as the sun rises ... Look both and watch the Moon.... Its gonna go... ↗⏫↗↗⏫ ...up and over... We're

I was confused what you meant by the highest point in the north.

It was gorgeous Busy Bee. I saw it this morning ; and it was around toward the southwest sky from where I live.