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But he said he loved me. (Poem) (581 hits)

He told me he loved me.
I'd heard this
All my life.

So I let him in.
His obsidian pearls
Caressed my heart,

A smile that could
Stop the clouds
From crying,

The touch of a
Thousand symphonies
Made life ok,

A fool's toxin
For five years total.
Never again.

Posted By: Ms FeatherFalls
Friday, April 19th 2013 at 2:44PM
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Thank you Irma! More to come :)
Friday, April 19th 2013 at 4:10PM
Ms FeatherFalls

I like it too.
Friday, April 19th 2013 at 5:20PM
Steve Williams

Hello FeatherFalls
Your poem is very moving. It quickly caressed my attention and kept it!
Nice!

Saturday, April 20th 2013 at 9:53AM
MIISRAEL Bride

So I let him in.
His obsidian pearls
Caressed my heart,

i like the Adjectives

obsidian ---sounds, Volcanic, violent, made of destruction and HOT
pearl --------is a treasure, made of softness, squezzing, and COLD

Saturday, April 20th 2013 at 10:17AM
powell robert

Welcome Ms. Feather Falls...I am pleased to meet a fellow poetess.
Sunday, April 21st 2013 at 7:04PM
Siebra Muhammad

I LIKE THIS POEM.(SMILE)
Thursday, April 10th 2014 at 6:47PM
ROBINSON IRMA

MS FF, I AM SO SORRY ROBERT USED MY APPERCIATING YOURPOEM TO DEMEAN YOU AND SO GLAD AFTER I DELETED MY SELF HE THEN SHOWED YOU THE PROPER RESPECT YOU DESERVE.(SMILE)...AND AGAIN LOVED YOUR POEM AND WELCOME TO OUT SITE...
Thursday, April 10th 2014 at 6:47PM
ROBINSON IRMA